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Jordan's avatar

That writing space looks so cozy. I like the chapter by chapter analysis you described. A succinct and focused process to identify any narrative issues. Thanks for using Plottr, too! :)

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks Jordan! I wanted to try Prottr for a long time now and loving it so far ☺️ Excited to see how it’ll help me once I’ve outlined the whole book with it!

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Jordan's avatar

It's a pleasure! That's awesome 🙌 Hope it's a massive help.

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Emily Charlotte's avatar

So many good revision strategies here—bookmarking for future reference! Thank you!

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks Emily! I’m so glad you found it helpful ☺️

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EmilyBooks's avatar

Thank you! This helps so much as I am on the last chapter of my first draft! I will definitely use some of these.

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks for letting me know Emily! I’m so glad it was helpful ☺️

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Lianna Fang's avatar

Thanks so much for this! Can’t wait to try some of these.

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

I’m glad you found it useful Lienna! ☺️

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Ashley B. Correa's avatar

Thanks for sharing! And I’m curious about reverse engineering world building🙋🏾‍♀️

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks for letting me know Ashley ☺️ I’ll let you know when I post an article about it.

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

I’m bookmarking this to help me through my editing process

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks Posy! I'm so glad you found it useful ☺️

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Megan Wittman's avatar

This is so helpful, best of luck with your editing!

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thank you so much Megan!

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Allison Tait's avatar

Thanks for the shout-out! And all the best with your editing - you've got this!

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thank you so much Allison! ☺️

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Monique Benné's avatar

This was super helpful, will be returning to this later. I’ve been stuck on how to create scene cards, thanks for posting this system… thinking about what decisions are made in each scene will be big

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

I’m so glad! Once I’ve done this step, I’ll share examples as well ☺️

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Scarlett Witherspoon's avatar

This is great! So helpful, I’m editing my book and I will use this guide to help me along.

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Aw, I’m so glad and good luck!

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Erin Latimer's avatar

This is awesome! I hope it goes well for you. The moonlight comment made me laugh, I also have such a hard time with continuity in the first draft. I always have such a strong visual image for what time of day certain scenes happen in, and as a result have to do the hard work later to make it all make sense from a timeline perspective 😆

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Thanks so much Erin! I’m glad I’m not alone in this 😂

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Sam Eau Claire's avatar

Love this!! So thorough, and full of great examples. You’ve collected some incredible advice

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Daria Henshaw's avatar

Aw thanks Sam!

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